Tuesday, October 7, 2008

MY LIFE

FIRST of all this poem that i'm gonna write is about my friend so i'm gonna write it in her perspective!! as if she wrote it!! OKAY THEN!! hope you like it!!




Have you ever awoken to a pillow,Wet from the tears you'd cried?

When you see the others at school,Do you want to run and hide?

Have you ever wished,Everyone would just leave you alone,But suddenly you missed,Once they were all gone?


Have you become numb,After hurting for so long?

Is your stereo on a loop,Of the same old, sad song?

Do you just want,Someone to ask you what's wrong,And actually care to hear the answer,About the burden you've carried so long?


Do you ever just want to breakdown,Fall to the ground and scream?

Stop acting like you're so tough,And let them know your heart's falling apart at the seams?

Have you ever felt invisible,To the human eye?

Do you want to let your feelings show,Just go ahead and cry?


You don't know what it's like,When people play games with you.

You don't know what it's like,When you just have no clue.

So, don't you judge me,Because you don't know what it's like,To walk a mile in MY shoes,To live a day in MY life.


i know i know it's kinda long!! i was bored at class so i wrote that!!;p i don't really like this peom that much cause i'm not really into sad endings and it's the first time i write something that's sad and ends sad!! so yah i wish you liked it!!;p hehehe
UPDATE:
this is for the people that prefer to read it in arabic or want to see how talented ARTFUL is
يا صاحبي مالك وللهم والأحزان ،، خلك بديره وهم في ديرهدع التفكير
وخل ما كان كان ،، وبحر الهم أمواجه كثير
هاذكر الخالق وتعوذ من الشيطان ،، واجدم بطريجك وخل الحير
هبضلوعي أضمك لي صرت زعلان ،، أنا صاحبك لي طلبت الجي
رهالقــســم الفكـــاهــيبصير لك الدوّه لي صرت بردان ،، وأصير
بأحلا كيكه خميرهولي يعت بصير لك أحسن خبز نان ،، ومرقوقة الطباخة سميرة
خل الزعل وبيبلك لولو ومرجان ،، وراوني البسمه الكبير
-ARTFUL
9A7 ILSANIK ARTY!!

20 comments:

q8Honey said...

U're a talented writer.. u reminded me of a soundtrack in grey's anatomy "I'm Falling apart..I'm barely breathing with a broken heart" i have no idea why i just did ;)

♥ P-Ella ♥ said...

no it's really cute poem you should keep on writting:)

Anonymous said...

mo layeg 3aleech being sad :\

bs ye7lo el green eye :P


oh one more thing.. lovely writing mashallah :) :P

MeeMzZ said...

q8Honey
LOOOL..THANXX SIS;P!! eeh i remember this soundtrack!!;p



♥ P-Ella ♥
really ya think?!;p if i continue writing it's just because you told me too!!;p



Anonymous
ee i know tell me 'bout it!! anyway it's not about me it's about her i'm not the one who sad sh's the one who's sad!!;p

thaaaaaaaaanx!!;p ta3ly i wanna ask you a question why did u turn ur blog private!!;p

ĐǻñĎõøðñ said...

me likey :)

ManalQ8 said...

nice
:)

Anonymous said...

i didnt .. i just closed it for a while .

MeeMzZ said...

ĐǻñĎõøðñ
and here come again dandoona with her me likeyness ;p hehe



ManalQ8
inty a7la



Anonymous
ashwaaaaaaa!!

mo3ath said...

صح لسانج :D

انا عن نفسي حبيتها

يعني حضرتج تكتبين واول مره تكتبين حزين

طحنا عليج وين الكتابات الباجيه ؟ :p

Seattle dude said...

Man your friend must be really emo :P

ARTFUL said...

ana ma a3arf be9oool alsh3r alenglizi.. bs a7s enna mo lai hnak ;p

w9al alma3ana bs ma 7asait bjal alshe3er.. ymkn lanni mo mt3aod!!

=)

almhm y36ich al3afya o alft lch
she3r mtwa'9e3 3la nfs alm3na taqriban ;p

يا صاحبي مالك وللهم والأحزان ،، خلك بديره وهم في ديره

دع التفكير وخل ما كان كان ،، وبحر الهم أمواجه كثيره

اذكر الخالق وتعوذ من الشيطان ،، واجدم بطريجك وخل الحيره

بضلوعي أضمك لي صرت زعلان ،، أنا صاحبك لي طلبت الجيره

القــســم الفكـــاهــي

بصير لك الدوّه لي صرت بردان ،، وأصير بأحلا كيكه خميره

ولي يعت بصير لك أحسن خبز نان ،، ومرقوقة الطباخة سميرة

خل الزعل وبيبلك لولو ومرجان ،، وراوني البسمه الكبيره

وســلامــتج وتعـــيشــين

;p

ZaMaHReeR said...

well said meemz :D

Have you ever awoken to a pillow,Wet from the tears you'd cried?
yes sometimes, bs ykon ebsibat sa3abel mo tears :P

Big Pearls said...

really nice..you are talented mashalla

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MeeMzZ said...

mo3ath

7abat my poem!!YAAAAAY!!;P

owwwwwwwwwww chakatneee

*meemzz hides* hehehe



Seattle dude
MMMMMM...she's not really a close friend and i don't really like her that much!!...mmmm i don't think emo is the right word to explain her!!

but she's really mentaly sick!! but in some way i feel sorry for her!!;)



ARTFUL
LOOOOL...9ij laygloon your my big bro ana mo wayed with arabic shi3er winta mo wayed ma3a english shi3er


alah i3afeek!!

MASHALLAH MASHALLAH!! AWAL SHAY 9a7 ilsanik!!;p ow thanee shay i'm gonna update my post ow ba7ed ur shi3er ow ba7i6 you name next to it!! THANKS ARTY!!



ZaMaHReeR
THANX;P!!

LOOOOOOOOOOL...kaaak nafsee!!


Big Pearls
awwww thanx;p!! and ur soo kind!!

Charmbracelet said...

aaaw =* sooo goodd gurrl =)

So, don't you judge me,Because you don't know what it's like,To walk a mile in MY shoes,To live a day in MY life.
Nice (H)

-N~

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♥ P-Ella ♥ said...

YES CONTINUE !!

mashalla Artful writes too bs ma fhamt shay iam no good in arabic:(

ARTFUL said...

9a7 bdnch mashkora bs tra en3fas mo 7a6a masafat wlkalmat mtla9ga

3fastina allah yg6a3 eblisch ;p

MeeMzZ said...

p-ella
LOOOOL ANA I GET THE PIONT BUT ME TO I'M NO GOOD IN ARABIC!!;P


ARTFUL
LOOOOL ee i know madree arabic is a mess LOOOL!!;p hehehe